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Can someone correct a short text for me?
By Josianemember has saluted, click to view salute photosPremium member Comments: 1643, member since Sun Nov 06, 2005
On Sun Aug 11, 2013 07:18 PM
Locked by Josiane (144829) on 2013-08-12 15:25:46 I already submitted my assignment!

Hi

I took a translating class and I have to translate a text from French to English. I translated it but I feel like my syntax might be a bit weird. That's the reason why you should never translate a text in your second language. I would just need someone to give me some corrections that could make a difference. It's worth 40% but the final text is only 189 words. (and is in English)

I would PM the text to you and give you as much karma as I can.

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re: Can someone correct a short text for me? (karma: 1)
By TuniePremium member Comments: 1995, member since Mon Aug 08, 2005
On Sun Aug 11, 2013 07:21 PM
We do not need to know French, correct? If we don't need to know French, you can PM me.
re: Can someone correct a short text for me?
By Josianemember has saluted, click to view salute photosPremium member Comments: 1643, member since Sun Nov 06, 2005
On Sun Aug 11, 2013 07:26 PM
No, not at all. I think I did a good translation, it means the same thing in both languages. But I have some trouble with English syntax and so the text is not perfect in that sense.

I Pm'ed you :)
re: Can someone correct a short text for me? (karma: 1)
By AlwaysOnStagePremium member Comments: 7417, member since Sun Apr 18, 2004
On Sun Aug 11, 2013 08:01 PM
If you want another set of eyes, you can PM me. :)
re: Can someone correct a short text for me?
By Natashamember has saluted, click to view salute photosPremium member Comments: 2613, member since Fri Dec 31, 2004
On Mon Aug 12, 2013 03:00 PM
PM, I can help! :)
re: Can someone correct a short text for me?
By Josianemember has saluted, click to view salute photosPremium member Comments: 1643, member since Sun Nov 06, 2005
On Mon Aug 12, 2013 03:22 PM
Thank you Natasha but I already submitted my text today! :) I should probably close that thread.

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