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My first attempt to write a poem... :/
By Twirlin_girl
On Wed Mar 11, 2009 01:27 PM

The wind blows my hair back
as I lean into the wind
towards you
only hanging on by my fingertips
I smile
this moment
these past weeks
are everything I’ve been searching for
but I’m not ready
and I know it
because as I lean into you
and you kiss me
I want to run away

2 Replies to My first attempt to write a poem... :/

re: My first attempt to write a poem... :/
By twiggy9207
On Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:16 PM
interesting sense of push and pull in this situation! the last line is a surprise that makes a good end

:)
re: My first attempt to write a poem... :/
By dancegal2002
On Sun Jun 21, 2009 07:31 AM
Good work! :)

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