 Artwork My Arts (DeviantART) en>fr fr>en By Sparkle_Dancer  Comments: 1584, member since Thu Apr 28, 2005On Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:06 PM
Hey DDNers!!
Does any of you have an accout on DeaviantART?
I want to share my arts, here's the link: sparkleballerina.deviantart.com
Feel free to tell me what you think and/or to give me constructive critiques ^_^
Ohh and if you are a deviat, share you the link to your gallery!
Love,
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re: My Arts (DeviantART) en>fr fr>en By QueensJenn  Comments: 1278, member since Mon Dec 05, 2005On Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:19 AM
Cute! I'm not usually a fan of anthros/furries, but this is really nice.
Constructive critisism:
* Her right ear is coloured backwards; the pink should be on the bottom because (presumably) the ears face outwards in opposite directions
* Her back/waist is just a bit too thin. I know you need to have an arch, but it could be a little thicker and still keep the effect.
* The tree branch at the top is way too long XD.
* Her feet should not be together because she has one knee forward; the foot of the forward-leg should be at about the calf of the other leg.
I love the colouring though it really fits the mood of the piece, and the mushrooms are adorable! And I like how you did the lace effect on her stockings. Her hairstyle is neat too; I don't think I've seen one like that before.
Deviantart: well, I'm on there but I rarely post. Most of this stuff is quite old, quite bad, or both: the-eternal-rocket.deviantart.com |