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What do you do? A poem I wrote
By thedancingimp Comments: 158, member since Wed Dec 20, 2006
On Fri Jun 25, 2010 07:21 PM

This is a poem I wrote a few minutes ago. It is not one of my better pieces but I would love comments on it.

What do you when you are all alone,
And you can’t depend on yourself?


What do you do when the strongest thread,
Can’t hold you together?


What do you do when you’re crying out,
But no one hears you?


What do you do when the light dies,
At the end of the tunnel?


What do you do when you stopped living,
And are barely breathing?


What do you do when your friends,
Can’t seem to listen?


What do you do when do when you’re lost,
But don’t know where you want to go?


What do you do when you want to die,
And no one is there to stop you…

2 Replies to What do you do? A poem I wrote

re: What do you do? A poem I wrote
By stevj016 Comments: 23, member since Fri Jul 10, 2009
On Mon Jun 28, 2010 03:21 PM
So sad, and wonderfully written. Well done, this is fantastic!

Regards,
Stevj016.
re: What do you do? A poem I wrote
By imadancer2member has saluted, click to view salute photos Comments: 2400, member since Wed Nov 30, 2005
On Mon Jun 28, 2010 05:53 PM
*Chills*
<3 it! If you ever want to talk, feel free to PM

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