I've finally had a breakthrough on the project I've been working on. Seriously, the muse has just come upon me, it's CRAZY. I've been writing like a demon. Buuut... I need some critiques! I'm unsure about some things, I want to make sure the structure is clear, you know the drill.

BUT I don't want to post on here because it's very long - 25 pages single-spaced so far (with formatting), but mostly because I do want to seriously pursue getting this published, and I need to control where I put my work.

I do have questions about specific sections which are only like 5 pages long, and so on; I don't expect any of y'all to read the whole damn thing.

If you're interested in critiquing, please PM me your email and I'll send a copy to you

I threw it up [url=http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=19255]over there.[/u] The quality of the writing on the site is a little, uh, questionable, but I chose it over Fictionpress because you can't copy-and-paste. So yeah.